Adreos
 Insane Net Dragon Posts: 147
 | Aug 14, 2024 6:59 PM Re: Alvis Michael Corbyn IV |
Alright, a few things
- Black breaches don't take the dying, they take the dead. When using a black breach the old body is left behind a new one is created when the breach reincarnates them.
- With black breaches no items should be on the CS yet. I understand he intends to remake the portal stone and warp rod and aquire/make a long sword. But until he has them IC they should not be on the list. You may include them in extra infomation or hidden notes as a planned items and what process he will require to make them.
- Hammerspace
- How large of an item can be stored? I read the total weight limit but I'm interested in volume
- What happens if if living material tries to be stored? Is it just not able to enter?
- What do you mean by non-biological sentient? Is the like gollems or mechanical creatures?
- You use the word extreme to describe things in limits. But what qualifies as extreme? I may say a simple enchantment may be enough while you may say only appoclaypse level of magic is needed. You don't need to be precise but some idea of what can destablize or break stuff out.
- Teleportation - Is he able to move through what would otherwise be impassible mundane barriers? Like could he teleport into a closed bank vault, grab the stuff, and leave?
- Collapse - This one honestly has me concerned as being extremely overpowered. Being able to move over two tons from rest to twenty feet away in a single second is an insane amount of force. This basically means he could send a large sedan flying twenty feet in a second. This boils down a point and click (with a two second charge up) destroy anyone he wants. This needs to be refined before its ready for use.
- Fold Space - This seems mostly good as is. As it basically boils down to a speed up/slow down effect. My only question is range, how far away from himself can he fold space.
- Fission - Again mostly good. Only questions are is he limited to two and how long does it take to make the duplicate and disperse one of them.
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| When C4 comes a knocking, BOOM! |
Timelord
 Dragon Posts: 21 | Aug 14, 2024 10:31 PM Re: Alvis Michael Corbyn IV |
| Adreos covered pretty much everything. I would also ask for clarification on fission as to if the duplicates merge memories/experiences or one simply ceases to be. |
Davwyn and Solaria
Starwisp and cute minidrake duo Posts: 36
[Male] | Aug 15, 2024 3:08 PM Re: Alvis Michael Corbyn IV |
| There will be some unclear resolutions to how things may react physically from the spacial folding and distortions but looks good to me. |
Koen
 | Aug 15, 2024 3:55 PM Re: Alvis Michael Corbyn IV |
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